She rushed to the hostel..as it was getting late…
She expected her roomies would be angry as she was quite late…. ![]()
She ran in through the gates..and she could see that her room lights were on..
she quietly peeped in to see… all her roomies looking at the door….all were waiting for her…
Her room was the third from the hostel gate and had a window through which
she was noticing things going on in her room…
Her’s was a lively room….facing front part of the hostel…a near by lawn outside a garden, where girls were not allowed to enter
…a junior hostel was in close vicinity from the window….
She stayed with two of her best friends…all three of them used to roam around..
And their evening schedule included going for a evening walk…
haan but not alone …..they had quite good neighbours too… all six of them used to have fun together
and
evening walks was together on a daily basis…..
All of them were full of life….and hostel life as well as college life they enjoyed a lot… ![]()
Oho!!! and PL’s was tight for them.. they used to go to library…and at late nites..
when whole hostel would be sleeping… they used to be up..still studying…
and when they used to get bored..at late night….they would go to the terrace quietly…without waking up the other hostellites….
“Neha you are late..Where had you been all the time?” questioned Shital.. one of her roomies.
“Let her come in and then load her with questions” started of Riya ..her other room mate..
Neha was just coming in when her roomies saw her….Neha knew…Shital must be quite angry and will start off as soon as she comes in…. and Riya will give her time and then load her….
She knew them so well…
“I ..I ..I” Neha was about to start ….when Shital intervened …”What I….you didn’t have any extra class..you didn’t have any meeting to attend… you were not in the lab.. you were not in the library… there are no places were we didn’t search you….where had you been?”
Neha didn’t know what to say and she didn’t want to discuss about Raj….not now atleast and she didn’t want to lie either..
“I was sitting at the textile lawn…didnt know…when time passed off gals….come on..lets go now..and what about others…I hope they left…come on we will catch them out..come on get ready…I wil be in 5 mins…got to just watch my face….and we are moving….I am sorry ….kept all of you waiting
” said Neha..quickly taking her face wash…and heading to the washroom.
Shital had already started getting ready…. and Riya was still not convinced….she knew something was cooking up….
She came to the washroom….Neha was busy washing her face…..She looked up…saw Riya and gave a quick smile and said ” Give me 2 mins…. I hope you are ready” ..
Riya smiled back and said..”You know why I am here, don’t you?”
Neha didn’t speak…Riya continued “What happened dear…you look so dull…anything wrong… and what were you doing in the lawn…was anyone with you”
“No I was alone” said Neha..
“Well..I feared it…any problems with any of your friends….I know there won’t be a prob with your classes..
Did someone tell you something..tell me dear..what happened ?”
Neha knew she can’t hide things from Riya….Riya used to understand everything ..by reading a person’s face…
“Raj….is the cause of problem ..isn’t he?” Riya continued…
“Hummm….ya ..But how did you know…Oh..I feel so terrible…I am very bad…why I don’t know..I tired to find…but in vain ..when my friend is so happy…I am not…and I can’t lie anymore about this… I really felt terrible when he said he likes Rachna…why…I should have been very happy……….oh Riya….what is happening” saying this Neha couldn’t look up…she knew she would cry if she looked up..
Riya knew something was wrong ,she went up to Neha…caught her hand and said “Do you like him…?”
“No…We are friends…but I don’t know why I am so upset” said Neha…
“Well…then you need to think about this…don’t leave it as it is…because the next time you see them together ,it will hurt you more..I won’t say what I feel…because…I don’t want you to think the way..I think” Riya said….
and continued “Whatever you do..me and Shital.. always will be with you”
“Ya, I will think about it….but for now…I am fine…Thanks Riya…I really feel quite good now… ![]()
For now….I would be quiet happy to go for a walk…hey…Shital must be waiting….
Chalo…before she too joins us here…lets….move fast…”Neha said smiling to her roomie… ![]()
She really felt….light at heart…to have shared this with Riya…
And she knew she need to find out the cause of this problem today night itself..before it is too late..
Soon all three of them…moved quickly outside…all full of life….to catch all other friends outside…well in time… ![]()
Hey this one is also Kool. Gr8 story, But I don’t find an end here too. Are you going to write a third part? Will wait for that.
Sahi story hai. Good Work
Nice one simi …keep going.. nice one abt hostel..seems lik u missing thos dayz too much naaa !!!
Good one but Thodasa slow pace ,ji
Where do you take it from here now
Humm..Appu…..well…i dint find a end man…
ar dekh shayad no1 liked…koi read nahi kar
raha…:(
It was the best blog I have ever read…Keep it up Simi…
hey thnx..vishwanath…thnx 4 reading… i wil keep u updated
Hmm.. going on fine. As Appya said, thoda slow. But you would to take it forward … in third part very soon hopefully
I know writing fiction is not easy
Wo “About” wale link pe abhi bhi template hi hai. When r u going to edit it?
Humm…well… I cudn’t complete it in 2nd part… and winding up as u seem it slow can’t b done here…yaar feelings express karne mein time lagta hai ki nahi… anywys…next part.mein will c that pace ka…..
hey about wala i wanted to change …par .. anywys will do that…
hey Thanx Arup 4 dropping on my request
and thnx priti….
hey simi..gud work…acchi story hai…missing hostel..huh? me tooooo:(( lekin yeh kya story end kar jaldi se….
Hello Simi,
At last u hav written second part..nice one …eagerly waiting for third part..
Sahi story hai re,only gals and no boys
Chal write the third part jaldi aur dono mein
setting kar kya.
Keep up the good work!!!
Hey ….thnx.. smiths 4 goin thru….
same there 4 prasad and prashant…
3rd part hav 2 write yaar…par…nowadays…likhna nahi ho raha hai
Hadd hai. Ab aage kuch likhegi ya reitrement le liya blogging se?
Hey frnds!!
Happy GANDHIJI JAYANTI, LAL BAHADUR SHASTRIJI JAYANTi, Happy DASSERA and Happy Durga Puja!!!
I hope I covered all…. Hope u all had a gr8 time
And ooh Rams tera reply toh reh gaya
Retirement ka waqt tera hai… mera nahi [:)]
tu aajkal likne laga toh mujhe bol raha hai badi badi baatein….anywys will write aage ka part soon….keep reading and keep bloggin 2…cya
And ooh Rams tera reply toh reh gaya
Retirement ka waqt tera hai… mera nahi
tu aajkal likne laga toh mujhe bol raha hai badi badi baatein….anywys will write aage ka part soon….keep reading and keep bloggin 2…cya
hi simi…gr8 going…….and sorry for the writing the comments so late……..waise tune yahan per rachana ka naam specify kiya hai…….i hope u rmember there was one grl at our hostel and her name was rachana……
Well tere doubts ke liye Neha and Shital bhi shayad college ke kuch students ka naam tha.. but as i said ..its a fiction…naam kabhi kabhi shayad kahi mel kaa jaye…kar story is a fiction
Hey Simi, write the 3rd part…..and no other articles and what about the one you told u have started,come on….write something
waiting
Ab blog likhne ka chod ke comments likhte rehne ka naya hobby hai kya yeh? [:D]
Haan!! kuch aisa hi erada hai….mujhpe story likh jaldi…sahi hona chahiye dekh
Oh, is it a description of a girls hostel, sounds good to me, again narration seems awesome
Thanks again!!!! ya description is of gals hostel…i really miss my hostel days